243. The River Of Life Comments

Profanisaurus, I had a little trouble digesting the end of the poem; it made me think! and I don’t have time to think! ! ! hee-hee. the majority of the poem was grand. a great video of a flow through life with some advice thrown in for good measure. this shall be a welcome addition to the September ‘showcase for PH poets’ on my PH site. sorry it took so long to get added after your first Sept. poem; I was away from PH for all but about 20 minutes for the past nine days! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I hope you are well and hope YOUR river of life flows smoothly and gets you over the waterfall into the peaceful lake, with or without a partner! I’ll also send this to MyPoemList. have a rock-hopping, ice cream licking bonanza of a week! bri :)