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I like the third stanza: Don't know what's taking you so long, you said you will return before it rains. Its been so long since you've been gone, and I'm still awaiting my chance. And the lines: As I can still hear you so loud, calling out my name, whenever its starts to rain.... This is so tender and heartfelt. Every line is filled with sadness and happiness at the same time. This is perfect for someone that lost a special person in their life and are not able to pen the pain. I think you have done that for them. Hugs and kisses. xoxo. B.B.

nice poem beautifully penned10

nicely penned drenched in pain i like that thx for sharing

i ran out of words...beautiful description of such deep feelings