Thursday, July 30, 2015

241. My Future Comments

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My future was just fading hope
my past a collection of broken dreams
my present was not worth fighting for
even if I had the strength
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Darlene Walsh 03 August 2015

It was a sad and depressing poem, I was about to start shedding a tear. Then I got to the 4th stanza, and what a change. It's amazing what just a few words can do (and of course everything that is behind those words) . btw, it's very close to the story of my life

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