24 hours is given to me
to fulfill my all commitments
not even a single second
can be added or minimized
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So beautifully said Ramesh. If we cannot achieve our goals and dreams in life, within 24 hours, what good is a century of doing nothing, adding to our lives? Every moment in life is a precious petal of being. Another great idea, Ramesh. Thank you for the seasoning of reason you place in my mind through your poetry.
to achieve the goal of my life.... nice one i liked..10 day and night you are right time is limited but you are committed
Very nice thought. A short life of good deeds is better than a century of nothing.
Each 24hours if spent wholly will certainly be precious for the Century of our lives! A beautiful advice to all! !
Ramesh Rai I admire your intellect, a well written poem, indeed all we have is 24 hours if we don't make them work as you rightly say from moon to sun, we lost them.
a day of a lion is better than a century of a jackal.