Tuesday, February 12, 2013

24 Hrs. Of Life Comments

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24 hours is given to me
to fulfill my all commitments
not even a single second
can be added or minimized
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Akhtar Jawad 13 August 2014

a day of a lion is better than a century of a jackal.

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Roseann Shawiak 23 March 2014

So beautifully said Ramesh. If we cannot achieve our goals and dreams in life, within 24 hours, what good is a century of doing nothing, adding to our lives? Every moment in life is a precious petal of being. Another great idea, Ramesh. Thank you for the seasoning of reason you place in my mind through your poetry.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 17 November 2013

Beautiful words and beautiful plans.

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Heather Wilkins 03 October 2013

2 hours would mean more than a century. good write

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 August 2013

to achieve the goal of my life.... nice one i liked..10 day and night you are right time is limited but you are committed

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Tribhawan Kaul 09 July 2013

Very nice thought. A short life of good deeds is better than a century of nothing.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 17 February 2013

Each 24hours if spent wholly will certainly be precious for the Century of our lives! A beautiful advice to all! !

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Hardik Vaidya 12 February 2013

Ramesh Rai I admire your intellect, a well written poem, indeed all we have is 24 hours if we don't make them work as you rightly say from moon to sun, we lost them.

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