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'...perhaps a sparkler fading a temporary tattoo on the night sky' Love the imagery that runs through this cosmic poem where thoughts collide as time's 'inconceivable reach' is grasped. j.

its an exellent poem with fusion of diverse things and great imagery...well composed and interesting...

This is pure class, very thought provoking and really well written.I enjoy a lot of your work but this one is extra special Thank you Nik

whoa my pothead friend! I think it has finally allowed you to write the perfect poem. Sad, and distant, but at the same time really deep and in touch. I got a crazy cosmic vibe on this one. Also, the last stanza is effin awesome 'Flashes of pleasure' onward...really good dude, really good.