Wednesday, May 24, 2006

23 Fitzroy Road, The Old Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

PART ONE.

OK, old man lets finish this,
the old man stands up with
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Desirae E. 29 June 2006

wow, very powerful, good job

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DAVID..GRAPHICALLY PROFOUND..STRONG WRITE NICE OIHUSE OF ACCENTUATION W/LETTER CASING'''''''''''''''FRANK

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Duncan Wyllie 30 May 2006

Dear David If one part of this is real then it reachs full impact, if not it still stands a very well crafted piece, REALLY! I could almost see the scene, very powerful words there, Hope you managed to move on from this in some way Love Duncan X

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David Gerardino 25 May 2006

WHY DID I WRITE THIS, NOT A CLUE................

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