Wednesday, January 25, 2006

23 Fitzroy Road........Paranomal Jump Shot. Comments

Rating: 5.0

DRUNKARD fiddlers fill your
legs with song, your body
shakes, and tumbles, then drops
to the floor.
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Ruby Root 08 July 2006

Hi David, I think this poem is really good. You have great imagery. You are a talented writer and I enjoy reading your poetry. I hope you are not mad at me but I do not like violence that's it. Sorry if offended you with the last poem. Take care.

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***** ********* 25 January 2006

Alcohol is a vicious addiction that is for sure David. should that be, it wasn't my fault? And Devil. Just a thought. 9 from Tai

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