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Hi David, I love your poetry. It is really expressive and you write with great emotion. you have a lot to say in these poems of yours. Excellent.

WE END WHENCE WE START...CDEATIVE DECISIONING...''''''''''FRANK

How extraordinary, I have just commented on a poem of yours confusing 'cultures' with 'vultures' and suddenly see you have vultures in this one! Was the other one a subliminal message?

this poem is in the carter style it shows a lot of confusion wanders of in many directions you weren't a member of his poetry CLASS were you david OR MAYBE carter was your pupil REGARDS AJS