23 Fitzroy Road , Drop Me Deep Comments

Hi David, I am sure a lot of people must be following your poems. This is excellent. It like a mini series. Take care.

NICE USE OF IMAGERY...THEME, AS USUAL IN ECCENTRICCICAL FORCE... GREAT WRITE, GOOD SIR! 10 4 ''91''''''''''''FRANK

I like your style David. Short, sweet and very succinct.10 from me. I love artists by the way. All the best Tai

This is the seed of something good. Hope you add to it and create a song there.

the title is that somewhere in Melbourne Australia David you seem to have grown very articulate all of a sudden perhaps you swallowed a worm when you had a shot of tequilla this morning OGY ASM

Pretty intense, David. I don't get the title though.