23 Fitzroy Road, Beach Boys 1 Comments

Hi David, This one was really sad, and again I like the way you write and the emotions that are expressed in your poetry. Take care.

DAVID...THE SAGA TAKES A TWIST...WANDERING ROADS TO ''WHOKNOWSWHERE''KEEPS THE READERS INTEREST...10 SPOT 4 TH' BEACH BOYS....'''''''''''''''FRANK

Thank you David for ringing a bell. x

THIS poem is about a friend of mine in high school, he had a thing about the beach boys music, his dad would take away his tapes/records, , , , , , , , , , , , , , and then, beat him up, keep in mind that he came from a, rich part of town, to this day i wonder if hes ok, or dead....................

Gripping, mysterious...and highly disturbing. I was intrigued, David. Do it again.