(23) Before The Periwinkle Withers Comments

ok.... really amazing piece of work... starts with a silent humour, very interesting. rhyme gives a good rhythm and flow to it. in the middle stanzas good euphimisms.... and a sentimental touch in the end... nice pennin.... and that too after 00: 00 hrs.... keep up the good work....

hey yaar wah wah wahh This poem was written unbelieveably at 12.30 am and i am glad its so beautiful it could not have been better