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love dont have any last day my friend..but you feared right.. you feared and wrapped it in words brilliantly.. grt..job..10 again..

A minute to midnight, a moment to decide, if I live on still, your love that I feel, could be the past or the last, till you wake me up in the next dawn, where you'd give me your smile and kisses.

First my feelings for you and only you, have been quite very true. Quite a pity it's long overdue. Well I loved these lines...awesome write-up

First my feelings for you and only you, have been quite very true. Quite a pity it's long overdue. Well I loved these lines...awesome write-up

Dear so simple yet touching... keep up the good work! ! ! Cheers, Sikta

Great title to accompany your thoughts in this verse. I like the idea of a first meeting at a window sill. You should write about that. Frank