Monday, May 11, 2015

221. Garden Of Love Comments

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My love let us create a garden together
one that will look great in any weather
we both work well together my cutie
as we toil to create this thing of beauty
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Jaden Knight
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Neena Change 02 July 2015

Enjoyed this thanks! :)

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Bri Edwards 20 June 2015

cutie/beauty ..............cute! favorite lines: we will never deal with pests they'll steer clear of us and bug the rest and see as they themselves grow until they're old enough to be let go........................ will you eat your children, or sell them, or just let them rot? ..............of course i take things LITERALLY, but you may actually be talking about human offspring, whereas i've been thinking flowers and/or vegetable the whole time until just now. ? ? ? and and as our souls rise to the up above our bodies can rest in our garden of love ......... ok, i'm back to thinking of soil and vegetation. to MyPoemList and into my/our June showcase for PH poets/poems on my PH site. THANKS. bri :)

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Ging Taping 27 May 2015

Hope it will come true.. Good luck :)

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Ging Taping 27 May 2015

Hope it will come true...good luck

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