((22) I´ll Give You My Eyes Comments

This is a sweet honey coated poem.An eye opener for lovers.Good job Luis!

brilliant, the idea is lovely and your words are delicate thanks for sharing

Excellent idea, love it.

Poem with profundity. I will give you my eyes, Then I shall see through your eyes, All distances will eliminate, Differences won't incriminate. CP

A very moving poem, moving from irony to true love. - Will

a lovely poem written on love, i liked it thanks 10 for this wonderful write rgds asif

nice give eyes and feel oh so close- so romantic thanks for sharing regards anjalie (do read mine ARE U THERE)

wow it was very romantic...good job

Love is lively here....well done.

if that's a real story, all i can say is God help you! ! lol keep up the good poetry

The title is so moving. The love is so strong.

This is beautiful, portraying sincere emotion... well done.

«knots untie, breathe slowly».- care poetic with a rhythm … it is important and beautiful

Just when i needed a very refreshing piece.This come on time..A powerful penning you have..i love this

Elegant language, this poem displays a real understanding of the way in which language works.

This poem draws my empathy with the use of 'voice' more than once, revealing your unconscious acknowledgment of its value, most especially to singers and actors like me. I can also empathize scene-wise. I hear you - the strong person - prescribing a new way of approaching and doing things. The insightful, philosophical you is also observing and analyzing things here in a manner unfrequently thought of. Your comand of English and use of metaphors is noteworthy and the title, very catchy, hitting a person at the core. A very powerful poem, indeed!

When sweet voice needs care, can it be sweet anymore?

yeah i love this poem.

Yes how do you protect love and preserve the shimmer in your eys...what a lovely lovely poem....a shining loving poem from you-Pia

me gustó mucho. en mi opinion es muy bueno..