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ମିଳନ ର ରଙ୍ଗ- 21 (Milana Ra Ranga -021/Odia Poem) Comments

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ସେ ଦିନ ସପନେ ଥିଲ ମୋର,

ଦୁଇ ସାଥୀ ଯାକ ନିକଟ ରେ,
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Soumya Ranjan Rout 05 November 2017

ମୋ ଅନ୍ତର ମିତ ମୋତେ ଦେଲା ଜୀବନ ର ନୀଳ ଅନୁଭୂତି, ମୋ ଦେହ ର ସାରା ମାନଚିତ୍ରେ - ଦେଉଥିଲା ବୋକ-ଭରା-ତାତି ।। Nice thought

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 07 November 2017

Thanks dear Soumya for the inspiration.

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Sonali Parida 08 November 2017

ମୋ ଅନ୍ତର ମିତ ମୋତେ ଦେଲା ଜୀବନ ର ନୀଳ ଅନୁଭୂତି, ମୋ ଦେହ ର ସାରା ମାନଚିତ୍ରେ - ଦେଉଥିଲା ବୋକ-ଭରା-ତାତି ।। Lovely poem shared. 10+++ for it. I agree with you dear.

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Sonali Parida 08 November 2017

ମୋ ଅନ୍ତର ମିତ ମୋତେ ଦେଲା ଜୀବନ ର ନୀଳ ଅନୁଭୂତି, ମୋ ଦେହ ର ସାରା ମାନଚିତ୍ରେ - ଦେଉଥିଲା ବୋକ-ଭରା-ତାତି ।। Lovely poem shared. 10+++ for it. I agree with you dear.

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D Priyanka Singh 05 November 2017

Before the limbs or lips or hands feel each other, the soul and the heart starts reading each other, feeling each other, getting into one form of existence. One lives for the other, dedicates all the desires just to keep the counterpart happy and eternally alive. Love this poem.10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 07 November 2017

Thanks dear Priyanka for the inspiration.

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Sonali Parida 08 November 2017

ମୋ ଅନ୍ତର ମିତ ମୋତେ ଦେଲା ଜୀବନ ର ନୀଳ ଅନୁଭୂତି, ମୋ ଦେହ ର ସାରା ମାନଚିତ୍ରେ - ଦେଉଥିଲା ବୋକ-ଭରା-ତାତି ।। Lovely poem shared. 10+++ for it. I agree with you dear Priyanka dear.

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Alina Kaikeyi 05 November 2017

A meeting with the soul mate, even if in a dream, adds colours to the life. Before the limbs or lips or hands feel each other, the soul and the heart starts reading each other, feeling each other, getting into one form of existence. One lives for the other, dedicates all the desires just to keep the counterpart happy and eternally alive. Great poem on meeting the beloved. 10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 07 November 2017

Thanks dear Alina for the inspiration.

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Sonali Parida 08 November 2017

ମୋ ଅନ୍ତର ମିତ ମୋତେ ଦେଲା ଜୀବନ ର ନୀଳ ଅନୁଭୂତି, ମୋ ଦେହ ର ସାରା ମାନଚିତ୍ରେ - ଦେଉଥିଲା ବୋକ-ଭରା-ତାତି ।। Lovely poem shared. 10+++ for it. I agree with you dear Alina.

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