21 Haikus Comments

21 wonderfully written haiku's!

Haiku structure; limmerickal content....well, well, well.

Green leaf, bloomed, beautiful.

These two gave me the best laugh. The Pope is German he drove an old Volkswagen God kept it running. Speedy Gonzales must have been a Latino illegal alien? Hilary Clinton has eaten the presidency. Not my choice either. Hilary Clinton can taste the presidency she's not my taste though

Very interesting Haiku's indeed Herbert, you definitely do have the syllable count spot on. Haiku is one of my favourite forms of poetry, I see these Haiku's are contemporary rather than traditional. I like the change, I find a touch of humor in some, some of a rather serious nature, all in all they're very good. --Melvina--

dandruff, polka, Pope, and Library of Congress-these four brought a smile. you do get the syllable counts right, but sometimes your haiku seems the foreplay of a limerick.

I believe our line of thinking is quite the same LOL! ! KK

Brilliant. Thats all I can say Ian

Voting here seems as efficient as the 'ole American Electoral College. I rate them all a 10, but then again I'm only French through association.

Some of your haikus are quite humorous.

that chris seems like a nice fellow the same age, and he's from france dont we just love the frogs Warm regards allan