Monday, February 16, 2015

21 Candles - (Dedicated To The Egyptians Slained In Lybia) Comments

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Light up twenty one candles for us,
let every candle bear our name,
in every light of that candle
will glow our silenced dreams-
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Bernedita Rosinha Pinto
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Unnikrishnan E S 10 February 2022

The root verb is ‘slay' and its past participle is ‘SLAIN'. Please correct it as ‘slain'. Thank you.

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Unnikrishnan E S 10 February 2022

Dear poet, The caption of the poem needs a small correction. There is no word "SLAINED". The root verb is ‘slay' and its

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 February 2022

So sad are the incidents that happened in Lybia. Reading, one's heart is heavy with emotions

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so sad but true depiction... clear 10 dear Lay a wreath Wednesday,8th July 2020 we are sent to gallows and you shall not be allowed to lay a wreath after our death Hasmukh Mehta

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Rajnish Manga 08 January 2018

A very poignant piece of poetry. Recalling the sacrifice of those martyrs. Thanks. Light up your candles in memory of us, each candle will hold our name

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Bharati Nayak 30 March 2015

A great and heart touching poem with powerful expression.

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Bharati Nayak 30 March 2015

Very heart touching.A great poem with powerful expression.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 February 2015

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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