Sunday, April 16, 2006

208 ~ Through The Door Comments

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through the door
came a quick, soft breeze
that had bounced off trees
through the door
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stan pelfrey
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Dan Tharp 16 April 2006

I found this poem to be captivating, Stan. I like the tone of it all the way through... Nice job. An Empty Doorway An empty doorway stood alone in the presence of his ghost - and recollected memories of such days gone by. And for the moment there was spent the time it takes to walk away... to witness such a fleeting host - with mere memories to indemnify in the time it takes to say goodbye. dan tharp

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