Saturday, April 11, 2015

203. If You Do Not Love Me Comments

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It matters not to me about what money you have
the size of your bank balance would not impress me
a mountain of coin would not keep me faithful
if you did not love me
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 31 July 2017

it appears you took Kim B.'s title suggestion. i like it.. i am resurrecting this from where i placed it nearly two years ago, in MyPoemList, and putting it near the end of my LONG (over 40 poems by over 40 poets) August showcase. if i draw poems for a showcase in Sept. from MyPoemList, i should start from the end of the alphabetical list of poets! ! Thanks. i hope you have been able to upgrade your computer access and anything else in your life you may have been wishing to upgrade! have a snapdoodle haymaking summer/fall/spring/ and...........ooops! i have winter out of order. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 23 December 2015

another great poem, Profanisaurus! and a thank you to K.B., if your title came from Kim Barney to MyPoemList and into the DECEMBER a showcase for PH poets, Section A. thanks. bri :)

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Kim Barney 26 September 2015

John, I love this poem, but I think it needs a proper title. How about If you do not love me or If you did not love me ? Well written.

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