Thursday, December 31, 2015

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The dawn of this new year
has lighted up my dim eyes
that see her rocking a cradle
where will grow REALIZATION.
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PARTHA SARATHI PAUL
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Jazib Kamalvi 28 April 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Partha Sarathi Paul. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Terry Craddock 31 December 2015

'The dawn of this new year has lighted up my dim eyes that see her rocking a cradle' powerful contrast to the next line, realization can have huge impacts

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