I will surely be looking at you
When
On 31st December
Your last rays of light
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So, Bharati, I guess nearly 9 years ago you were 'looking' at 2015. So far, I've esp. enjoyed reading: As you walk into history Adding pages to the lives who lived you Leaving vacant who could not see you.'
The year 2015 was a particularly memorable one: the sky was so shiny, my garden was greener, and the sea more blue. Your poem brings back all these memories to me. Brilliant.
Such a nice description.... I love it..... Read my poem Let me rise too.. Naila
The trails and blazes The pictures and shadows Must be there behind They grow dimmer and dimmer.flowers, birds, butterfiles, gifts, sea and kindness and goodness...... a simple and loving poem bidding goodbye and giving thank you to the year 2015. such a nice poem dear Bharati. it reflects your kind mind........ thank you. tony
A beautiful poem so nicely penned. A flash of memory of 2015 is nicely scripted
For me You will always be remembered With love As you brought me Many beautiful gifts My friends- flowers- - birds- - butterflies And a sweet melody That always rings....2015 will be always remembered for you as it has brought many prosperous to you with them sorrounding to your environment. This poem has been nicely inscribed. Thanks for sharing.
A wonderful way to close out the old year and usher in the new. Thankfulness is a sign of greatness!
This reminds us that we must be grateful to God for all good things and times coming our way in our life- year after year. Wonderful way of bidding farewell to the year that was 2015: As you brought me / Many beautiful gifts / My friends- flowers- - birds- - butterflies / And a sweet melody / That always rings
This is blessed poem of gratitude: you find reasons for appreciating rather criticizing the departing year. And I believe you identified the source of your positive outlook - it's that SWEET MELODY that's always playing as the background sound of living. We just finished the rigorous task of paying homagetomvictims of terrorism. Your poemonthispage shows what makes lifemsom precious.
As you walk into history Adding pages to the lives who lived you Leaving vacant who could not see you......... super farewell to heave earth for another year,120))) . .what a tribute that blazes glory of trodden path, all through the dawn to dusk to make history, yet memory haunts to hold back the lost hours yet by quantum day let me prren into another year,
May your life be full of many more blessings in 2016! A nice tribute to 2015. Lovely drop! !
A beautiful way of bidding adieu to 2015. When life gives many gifts, we have to be thankful! An attitude of contentment and gratitude will make life one of greater blessings! I wish that 2016 too turns to be one of many sweet gifts and blessings for you Bharati!
dear Bharati, I hope every future year is as kind to you. You and I are two of the 'lucky ones' in this world. ***** bri : )