If God might let me walk the paths of 2014,
(ameen)
then I shall spend it
as a research scholar, a student of life;
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If only we are gods...we can make life perfect! Nice imaginary!
very well. may you shine. ameen. i see here, life, pure life. life has wishes, hopes, dreams, aims. life is a great gift and responsibility.
shame on those stars for being so picky. i especially enjoyed reading and considering, ever so briefly, the lines: steal the shades from the rainbow stripes, the colored band, and make them the ink for my new poems; ............that should be interesting! but leave a little color in the sky for the rest of us to enjoy, please! yes, stay safe....if possible. thanks for sharing. :) bri
What a solemn and sublime vow! .........''declare myself a soldier hard against the seven deadly sins; ...May God bestow you with courage and strength!
Amazing ambition! Well written my friend!
Amen let the year (life) goes with your motive dreams of noble heart Happy new year and holidays
A well composed, thoughtful, optimistically positive and a poem full of hope. I have nothing more to say but AMEN
A well composed, thoughtful, optimistically positive and a poem full of hope. I have nothing more to say but AMEN
... a wonderful poem... may this year bring you whatever you longed for...
Against d seven deadly sins wah, what resolutions, yeah a luminary to enlighten yor own path. Ah yes. And to b a researcher is a very Islamoscholar type person which is a great line. Fond wishes.
Best Wishes to you Shahzia. Keep dreaming and take a steps towards it. You will definitely make all your dreams come true. Let 2014 brightens you life. God Bless you!
Very best wishes to you also Shahzia - I hope you achieve all you wish for in the coming year.
To be a student of life. A teacher is a student for life any way. To do research about life and be student of life is a noble motive indeed. Wish you a great new year.
wat a fantastic New Year resolution Mam, which works towards our individual betterment, to emerge a more stronger person than we are now. We wish you too a v happy new year
some NEW YEAR RESOLUTIONS here :) I shall rise and I shall shine You are and you will always be a shining star not only in the world of poetry but in all areas of your expertise and NO DOUBT they are many :) A delightful poem! ! !
I am amazed looking at the poet's notes! ! Well..if my random scribbles (That too, My 2013 being totally unrelated to your 2014) inspires in literary terms and otherwise, a legend like you in becoming a world known poet/artist, I'm more than satisfied and humbled. That day, just like a matchstick which was used to light an ever enduring blazing flame, I'd be happy to realize that my purpose was served. I wish all the success to you in your endeavors, or rather let me put it this way, battles. World has always respected those who show that undying spirit to stand up and fight. Charge ahead, whether it is one or a thousand people in front of you. Fight for you. Then you can be the change you want to be. As always, an excellent write Shahzia Ma'am!
The images used in the poem are attractive and takes in the word of imagination. May this new year come true all the dreams