Thursday, January 8, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

A comet across the sky
or a war within my mind,
A bitter battle fought
or a love come to naught
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David DeSantis
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Alison Cassidy 13 January 2009

A fascinating science fiction ride into tomorrow, written as the two sides of an unresolved argument perhaps? Wonderfully innovative penning. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Onelia Avelar 10 January 2009

David Desantis - a comet across the sky of poemhunter :) It's nice to see you again, blazing. An intriguing poetical oracle here, free for interpretetion, easy flowing...Good work!

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Anita Atina 10 January 2009

Enlightened human race... oh that will be the day! ! ! Good to see you here David.

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David DeSantis

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