The night looks like a romantic girl
Ornamented with a million twinkling stars.
She has veiled her face like a coy maiden
Who cherishes her love for her sweetheart.
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The night looks for her Love so secretly To make love with him so passionately Like a youthful mysterious girl Who wins her lover's heart with her holy love. The night has been personified in the poem. The comparison of the night to a mysterious girl has been nicely done. The poem is truly well penned. You deserve 10.
Thank you so much dear poets for your kind comments on my verse.
Magnificent fusion of nature and love brought out through telling imagery.10++++++
Very well written. One can make the night your woman for her beauty is displayed in the sky and her darkness holds passion and romance.
Thank you so much dear poet Mr. Robert Murray Smith for your love words on my verse.