Saturday, November 17, 2007

2008 Comments

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As two thousand and eight
Approaches us.
More will find time to fuss and cuss.
But this coming year
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Timothy Olapeju OGUNSAKIN 04 August 2008

Y2K8 is otherwise a sorrowful joy To mankind. To them that are of good manner Is joy To them that are of mannerism's lacking Is sorrowful. Your poem is wonderful, a prophetic prayer I love it. The Lord will help you.

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Konjit Berhane 10 February 2008

man this line is great and scary too Two thousand and eight, Will expose truth for what it is! And this fact alone... Will leave many stunned! Traumatized to tears! i hope it will be a great year and u should get an agent...coz ur poems are kooler than i thought for ur age koni

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Melvin Banggollay 27 January 2008

A wonderful poem to read for being full of challenging passion for 2008. thanks and best wishes, melvin

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Aaron Tate 17 January 2008

:) Faith is a strong thing. And the evil do get the chance to get power, but none the less they loose it shortly after. Hopefully this year won't be as 'arghhhgravited' as last year.

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