2008 Olympic Games Comments

I like sport and I like poem, and the two you have combined. Nice one, Ahmad.

a summary of the 2008 olympic games in such a few, detailed, vivid words...masterfully done.

citius altius fortius Rachel Ann Butler

sports and fireworks.nice posted10 surya

Breath taking, i loved it soooo much! ! !

Not strictly Haiku but very similar..... very well constructed poem this. Well done. Ruthy

nice poem which takes the breath away with its delicacy...mine ten

Sportivity for everthing else too......Olympic spirits shouldn't play every four years in sports only, my friend. But for ever in EVERTHING (yea, sounds like the impossible dream) . But no harm in dreaming and trying... Cheers. SUbroto

An ever lasting contribution to Olympics...wonderful...I like the last stanza

Interesting structure and choice of subject. Nicely put together.

nice words! !

think of the poor who were wiped of from shanghai for olimpics 2008.........

I find your style very strange.

Topical loved the Latin Tags

I love sport as well. I wanted to read what value you found in such. GW62

sport, friendship...nice poem

I did not see all of the Olympic opener, so I cannot appreciate all of your poem to the fullest. Not very sportive of me. I do like the ending: one world, one dream / five interlocking rings / blue, black, yellow, red, green / America, Africa, Australia, Asia, Europe This should appeal to everyone and is what the Olympics should be all about.

yes i agree quite incredible it was and your poem just does describe. good piece

AHMAD, THE OPENING CEREMONIES WERE BEYOND BELIEF. ABSOLUTELY INCREDIBLE. ARE THEY THE SUPER-PEOPLE FROM OUTER SPACE? IT WAS SO EERIE AND MYSTICAL. THEIR PROFESSED CONSCIOUS CONNECTION TO NATURE/BEING IN THE PRESENT MAY EXPLAIN THEIR ABILITY TO PRODUCE MIND-BOGGLING PERFECTLY COORDINATED DISPLAYS. WOW AND DOUBLE WOW. THANK YOU FOR CAPTURING IT AND SHARING. CAROL HUGHES (RHODES)

my favorite time ever! the olympics i love this poem, a wonderful summary beautiful! -maddy