1. I hate the way you make me feel guilty about everything I do,
2. I hate the way you can go forever without even seeing or talking to me, but expect me to talk to you.
3. I hate how you're so happy and I'm so sad,
4. I hate how you treated me like s*** but yet I'm the one feeling bad.
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I love how you describe everything so well. it such a personal poem with such anger and saddness. good job :)
Sounding a little like my 'Men Are Masochists' for they surely tend to dispay that trait.....
wow thats really clever. Thats the most ingenious method i've seen used to get your point across
It really feels like was created on your own experience I guess it is the best way to expess feelings and to make the work of poetry art