Tuesday, March 11, 2008

2 Twinkling Stars Comments

Rating: 5.0

Across a sky of indigo blue
On a cold and lonely night
Two twinkling stars hung silently
Just out of each others sight
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Ron Flowers 30 December 2008

Simply beautiful. Regards Ron

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Andrew Blakemore 28 April 2008

You have created some fine imagery within this piece. Well done. Andrew

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Peter James Davidson 25 March 2008

sweet words..... thank you for sharing

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David Harris 11 March 2008

What a wonderful rhythm that runs though this delightful piece. Trips off the tongue for an enjoyable read. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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