Saturday, September 13, 2008

(2) To My Brother´s Dog, 'Perrina' Comments

Rating: 2.9

The first day you woke me up,
did you open the door
or did I leave it open?
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Luis Gil de la Puente
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Sandra Fowler 24 December 2008

You capture the joy of a winter morning in Perrina's company with eloquence and grace. Merry Christmas, Luis. Happy to have met you in your poetry. Have a great 2009. And may the music never end. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

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I like your poem, dear poet Luis Gil. You feel the dog like Neruda in his poem 'My dog died' (which I have translated in greek) . Your poem has a nose (the dog's nose) to smell the enjoyable beauty and also the danger and truth of life. I give it a 9...but you are cabable to reach soon a full 10++, dear Luis Joseph S. Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) ILP awarded

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Luis Gil de la Puente

Luis Gil de la Puente

Palencia-Spain
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