2- Those Animated Pictures Shivered Him Comments

You handle the English language in a wonderfully, unique way. I love your use of the word, 'shivered' to describe your reaction to the animated pictures. Sarwar, I can honestly say, I have yet to read a poem of yours that did not richly deserve a ten. Warm regards, Sandra

good poem...10 from me...

animation reflects reality..in between fantasy, sometimes lead to animosity.

reminds me of my poem illusion. nice....i always enjoy your writes

Hey sarwar, great write and beautiful compostion.Its very true 'Lovers are tyrants Cities are forest Wisdoms are neglected Liar being worshipped' Eyeopener for all. thanks for sharing +10 to you

wonderful poem with a lot bare truth there, composed well

His memory opened the window where animated pictures were appearing that he could not understand the factum- i like this line, good composition, , , , , , , , , , thanks for sharing 10

The sailing thoughts from the sea shore fishing the facts.......good work.....

Due to technical problem Poet Francis Duggan could not directly comment here. He sent his comment on this poem to inbox as below- 'I gave it a ten I would give it a twenty if I could it is such a beautiful poem but then every poem you write is such a good poem excellent work Sarwar and thank you for sharing. F Duggan '

There seems a sad wisdom here. Enjoyed the third stanza most.

Wisdom finally appeared in the form of a tree. As it often does these days. I think people are fearful of their death and are preparing for their demise. GW62

In the very last line i found a precious key (or clue) to an eternal wisdom. Worthy reading the whole to the closing line. Well penned.

Turmoil reigns in a troubled mind, now where is that place of peace, yes in my inner soul! I'll go there. very thought provoking poem Sarwar