2- The Untitled Love Verses Comments

‘…Kisses are traveling // and she bestows // and he bestows // Passion has stopped the time…’ Excellent sojourner dear my Poet…brilliance galore.. Ten+++ Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite you read my poems with comments and….please watch out new posts: RECIPE OF MY FIRST KISS niv

'...Thirsty classic soil every inch thirsty...' Why for? Written in 'white-ink'. Namaste-ji and Namaskar. Ten dr. sakti

very nice! I love your unique style and the important meaning behind your words. If you have time could you take a look at some of mine. Best!

beautiful piece....titled beautifully...interesting every verses hides pain and longing of love very creative in style..... very unique....10+++++

WOW... IN THE TOP 500... IT S WRITTEN WITH A DIFFERING STYLE THT ONE DOESNT SEE TODAY... GREAT EFFORT AT UNTITLED LOVE VERSES... :)

well written. i am not that good to judge poems as i am still a kid, but i sure can say that this poem was a beautiful one. and i can see that it is one among the top 500 poems. congrats.

The steam of love...perfect! ! .................good work............all d best.........

It has been instilled into my mind with a title 'True Love or the cruel lover'. Absolutely correct but had it been otherwise i could not have read an excellent verse from you.

Excellent love poem, written with a lot of feel.Very enjoyable read!

Wow! ! ! liked most the below two lines... (How much pain infused in my heart you don't know! Yet I am living with your feeling wherever you go!)

...'touched by heart-felt words of' yours - the heart-felt, passionate words of love are the clue to the charm of your poem - they make it really touching!

very interesting, makes me all warm inside.

beautifully crafted piece of work... absolutely amazing....

Imagination well penned.........gud work, loved.... regards, geets

this was my favorite one

Very beautifully written and full of imagery. Good write.

touching, excellent....

this is an amazing poem. very honest, potraying unashamed passions. these lines jump out to touch my heart 'Beloved offered a dream that was sweeter than all sweet' i have fallen in love with these words. Thank You

This poem is so beautiful, its full of meanings and its just perfect, thanks for writing such a poem!

Wow there is a nice array of realistic fantasy. This poem obviously has one meaning but when you open your mind to other possibilities this can have meanings unparalleled to the point blank meaning. Nice write and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! !