Thursday, November 19, 2009

2 Sides Of The Same Story By Riley Rhodes And Vanessa Feliciano Comments

Rating: 5.0

My Best friend is the best thing that has ever happened to me
He makes me laugh
He sets me free
He makes me feel safe when he holds me tight
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vanessa feliciano
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James S Newcomb Lang 17 December 2009

Lovely, it sounds as though you have mutual uxorious love.

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Robert Uy 03 December 2009

Nice idea, different, of having two speakers confessing in one poem though not really conversing with each other.

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David Joaquin 19 November 2009

I know the sentiments of this poem all to well. Excellent 10/10.

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Emily Michele 19 November 2009

I LOVE THIS POEM! i relate to this poem alot i feel more like the guys point of view because i too am in love with my best friend and he doesn't like me back.: (This is really well written.

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vanessa feliciano

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Charlotte NC
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