Once together, now apart
One still with a broken heart.
One saying it will never be;
The other fighting reality.
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Really Clever and full of motion and emotion.Brilliant.Love Duncan
This poem is so clever/ it makes me feel that I want to get on a train and recite it to the sound of the train, it would just be perfect/ a totaly brilliant poem. cheers Sylvie
Very original, very clever - all too often we see only one side. I enjoyed this interesting poem. Well done. Warmest regards, CJ
An extraordinary effort my friend!