Now there are several dimensions to love;
Seeing's inadequate, too much is missed.
If only seeing were needed to prove,
Eyes would be open and light would be kissed.
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D.A., I love this one, the scope of it, the reaching into our very souls. One question: On the line that reads Its us the melody sings, would that sound better if it read more formally, for instance, It is we the melody sings? Just thought its us sounded a little to 'common language' for such beauty.
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D.A., I love this one, the scope of it, the reaching into our very souls. One question: On the line that reads Its us the melody sings, would that sound better if it read more formally, for instance, It is we the melody sings? Just thought its us sounded a little to 'common language' for such beauty.