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On her course merrily flows the svelte rivulet
She meanders not alone carries the sky on her breast.
In him grows a longing, love flowers in his heart
She doesn’t know it, on the sea is set her heart.
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in him grows a longing love flowers in his heart she doesn't know it on the sea is set her heart lovely worded
Simply phenomenal write.......Pradipji......great imagery.......you are amazing..........
As soft and sweet as love could be. The Line swiftly and quietly enter the heart. Thanks.
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7/22/2025 11:19:08 PM # 1.0.0
A concise and insightful rendition in verse with rhythmic splendour. Lovely and very passionate.