Friday, November 10, 2006

2-Lost Words Comments

Rating: 4.8

In the dark alleys of my mind
They run about.
Sometimes lost, sometimes found.
Sometimes emerging faintly through the dark
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shreya chatterjee
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R. H. Peat 31 July 2022

Great use of anaphora in the first stanza, a strong conceit as a whole.

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Sonya Florentino 11 October 2009

Only the sounds of laughter left behind, Perhaps tiny footprints here and there. i love the imagery of these....yes, i know what you mean....these phantom words...

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Anupam Sinha 08 January 2007

Nice poem. Creates an image which can be felt rather than seen.

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