Friday, August 18, 2006

(2) Long Distance Runner Comments

Rating: 2.7

I never knew I would be a long distance runner.

I´ve lost the drive to win
and my voice has become sweet.
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Luis Gil de la Puente
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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 November 2008

a true manly voice.....enchanting words.....fine! 10+++

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Joseph Daly 18 August 2006

This is a really wonderful piece Luis. I am sorry that I am unaware of who the subject is, but you paint a beautiful picture of them. The flow and the repetition of the line 'I never knew I would be a long distance runner.' is excellent.

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Luis Gil de la Puente

Luis Gil de la Puente

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