Tuesday, September 1, 2009

...2 Kinds Of Murder Which Is Worst? (Dark Diary Comments

Rating: 4.3

Twist a knife in a heart
Pull the trigger with one finger
And you have committed a sin
But there are more terrible things
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Zeinab Sherif 04 September 2009

wow mor than amazing again & again u prove ur ability & talent so, congratulations.

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John Knight 04 September 2009

Hi Eyan - You asked a question so I guess you want an answer. If a person is knifed or shot and dies as a result - its tragic but its final. We mourn - we bury - we celebrate the life and then have to move on. The loved one who has died - in tragic circumstances - their life (however short) is now complete. We mourn the death - but in celebrating the life we have much consolation. The second death you mention is much worse because it is living death. There is no funeral - no celebration - no closure. We can be victims of death by jealousy - hatred - pride and we need real strength from the Lord to get through each day - but each day is MURDER. Your poem has a warning for us to examine all our relatioships to make sure we are not responsibe for condeming someone to A LIVING DAETH. I would much rather go out quickly as the result of a terrorists bullet than die a slow daeth of shame - persecution - ignomy because someone stuck the knife of jealousy into me but forgot to twist it! Interesting concept - interesting poem. I scored it MAX. Every Blessing - JOHN

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An interesting poem Eyan with great imagination. Jealousy uncontrolled can be devastating and can lead to catastrophic events. Jealousy is also found in animals I found out so is not just confined to the human race. You asked what the opposite of jealousy is and I would say it is indifference. Well penned. 10 love Karin

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Angel's lyre 03 September 2009

special way of thinking, well composed and written, be blessed!

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there is a poet in me! 03 September 2009

very true.... awesome write.... thanks for sharing...a 10+++

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Catrina Heart 03 September 2009

One sour taste of love Is all it takes, to kill a rose It's also a form of murder! ---------- WELL SAID.........and TRUE! ! ! you knw i am a living dead breathing blood and have a heart of stone..........lol! ! ! 10+++++++

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Lady Grace 01 September 2009

jealousy can be cured...just be open, , tell her/him that u r jealouse..try to consider things so that this 2 sins can be healed..jealousy is caused from unequal treatment..so try to be fair...well, this is only my oipinion..lav ya..lav ya..

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 01 September 2009

A PHYSICAL MURDER SEEMS BETTER...VERY WELL WRITTEN...10

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