2 hearts may remain as one,
1 heart is yours,
The other is mine,
I once gave you all my love,
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ah..heartbreak.. now thats something i can relate to. just keep your mind off it, though it will be almost impossible. and for the poem, i think it was excellent. really captured and showed how you feel and the confusion accompanied with it. Poet In Pain
wow violent and......mice good poem jennifer you may have felt heartbreak but who hasn't one things for sure you have to let it pass like i did but its hard though possible your a good poet keep up the your work go go
I know exactly how that feels. Time heals all wounds. You will be alright.