Monday, January 16, 2006

2 Hearts Comments

Rating: 5.0

2 hearts may remain as one,
1 heart is yours,
The other is mine,
I once gave you all my love,
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Jennifer Cook
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Rebeca Valenzuela 04 February 2007

I know exactly how that feels. Time heals all wounds. You will be alright.

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The Poet In Pain 07 November 2006

ah..heartbreak.. now thats something i can relate to. just keep your mind off it, though it will be almost impossible. and for the poem, i think it was excellent. really captured and showed how you feel and the confusion accompanied with it. Poet In Pain

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Sam Finley 23 March 2006

wow violent and......mice good poem jennifer you may have felt heartbreak but who hasn't one things for sure you have to let it pass like i did but its hard though possible your a good poet keep up the your work go go

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