*****2 Haiku (Fog & School) Comments

So few syllables, such tremendous images. S :)

I love the form of the two poems. The geese seem to come from a distance, loom large overhead and move on to the opposite horizon. So much said with so few words!

geese flying south over the school bus a perfect V ...................... beautiful..! ! ! I can imagine this..looking up the sky. A perfect view..

Just lovely Ben....In three lines you manage to say so much -