2. Goodbye, And God Be With You All Comments

I enjoyed the sentiments expressed here but the last verse needs a bit of work for it to flow as smoothly as the first two. I struggled to get the meter and verbalisation right.

Very well penned. Sounds like you're in good company Mr Diamond! HG; -) xx

Farewell going to another journey of life........success and excellence all there is....Thanks for sharing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Cate