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I feel I am clumsy And I don´t want to be a girl any more Why can´t I focus on what´s good for me, On what´s possible? wow what a self esteem being a boy.. well done.. the courage for your own respect is remarkable and let me say, the best is ego satisfaction as you showed here in this rich and good poem..really well done..loved it..10/10

thats a very nice poem.we all need to focus on whats good for ourselves, keep up the good work.love phumudzo