2 Faces In My Mirror Comments

Like I said in my poem titled: In pursuit of Happiness: I have learned the hard and painful way that where is an ending, there is a new beginning What I thought to be a great loss, it turned out to be a blessing from the sky This deep and heart touching write of yours, is amazing and thought provoking! Powerful and well crafted! 10+++ Thank you for sharing! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

Pain running through the lines - imagery making the meaning of the pain and gloom more prominent! Duelity highlighted -still beauty persist to exist through the lines! Well written Piece! Winnie

love it mate. excellent word choice and passion.10 + if possible

it needs so much more than a 10 for a score

I felt every word. and i've walked through your verses some time ago but you beat me at putting it on paper Beautiful Poet! Lee

This is really good. Yes the world is cruel but its the lessons of life that teach us to go through it. who knows whats at the end but someday we will know it all. Good Job Britney

wow! ! That was amazing. While reading this i felt your pain and it is so familiar. Thank you.

Wow! I love the way you wrote this. The emotion and visuals behind it are amazingly accurate. I give this a definite 10+

I have seen the faces before as well. Wonderful choice of words.

you use great expression to write your pain. very imaginative in your metaphor of death being yourself. i have some poetry very similar to this that i have not yet had time to post as well as working on a new poem following the same idea. when i have them posted i will send you the links. as you know we have similar styles of both writing and thinking. to be honest i, reading this was like reading my own work. just remember don't give in, show no submission. let you pen's ink be your blood and your words be your acquiescence of thoughts into actions. excellent... a 10 my friend. Jen

It was a very interesting poem in a good way. I feel that many people can relate to this poem and I would love to read more of your work.

So, basically, I dig this one. Like I dig it six feet under.

yess a women couldn't be so cruel.. have to agree wit you on that one ha. On a serious note, your totally right I like it a lot!

that is a great poem..great words...I have a similar poem called the ladder...i will post it so you can read it...i love your words...

WOW! . this poem is amazing. I can definitely say i can relate to it. I'm only 16, but i've been through a period feeling like this. Though it is over, I still feel like this every once in a while. You did a great job(reading it made me go back to that time) It atually inspired me to write about that time, which i will post up soon.

Its sad with alot of feeling! I love it!

I like it alot so much detail and very intense amazing job

There's a lot of feelings in your poems I really enjoyed reading THIS poem...I think it relates to me...GREAT JOB...

wow this is very good. i really like it

First of all, I need to tell you that this poem is very intriguing. It catches your interest in the begining and the end is perfect. I love it because I can definetely relate. Depression and empy feelings ain't cool. I also love it because it outlines how complex the human mind is, kinda shows our 'two faces'. It's both haunting and true. It left me speechless!