Tuesday, November 11, 2014

~2 Ears & 1 Mouth~ Comments

Rating: 4.3

Sure, communication to connect is key
But is there really any reason I want to hear me?
Maybe I'm in love with the sound of my own vanity
Perhaps I just don't want to hear your rambling
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Kevin Patrick 18 June 2015

Wow I never want to get on your bad side, the pen is mightier than the sword, in this case yours is a serrated knife of barbed rhythms Your pseudo-intellectual infectious Pretentiousness' a self absorbed sponge I think someone once said that about me, might have been my mom. It really is about listening to what the other person is saying, and well both ears (and eyes) are brought to attention. Great Disses.

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Shania K. Younce 14 December 2014

I like this poem. It ended with a bit of a twist I didn't expect. I like twists. Bien!

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Professor Plum 09 December 2014

Nice poem Ed! A 10 in my book!

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Amitava Sur 01 December 2014

Yes I also fully agree that the humbug has to be shown the door at last to stop listening the rubbish more..... Thank you.

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Patricia Grantham 23 November 2014

Two ears and one mouth for a reason. Less of a talker and more of a listener. Good reasonings.

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Valsa George 13 November 2014

Oh my.....! What a harsh tirade on those whose rhetoric rattles and breaks your concentration! Your contempt for the pretentious pseudo intellectuals is evident here though you say it is humour....! Yes, it is biting humour which is sharper and more pointed than any rapier! Enjoyed!

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Ramesh Rai 11 November 2014

Beautiful presentation with sound and silent message what Nooren Carden has stated. A great job.Thanks for share.

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Noreen Carden 11 November 2014

Someone obviously pxxd you off big time I hope it wasn't me.I love the title my grandmother always told me there is a reason god gave us two ears and one mouth we are supposed to do more listening than talking. Great poem well done

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