Written as a wall plaque.
WHEN YOU ENTER THIS DOMAIN,
AND YOU WISH HERE TO REMAIN,
...
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nice work Alf I like the directness, no holds barred approach too many poems are filled with vague imagery, not this one Lee
I'll put that plaque on my wall. People do not realise that the Lord's name is holy, they do not know what they do, they do not know how it affects the world around us and the spiritual world.
Powerful message for a lost world. This message could be an eye opener to some believers as well
Also...perhaps-first and foremost- be placed in the hearts of the believers.10+++ Thanks for sharing!
these are just words.. but there i can see some thing is telling.. so nice piece dear luwi
A great, concise piece Alf. Not one word wasted, and yet says it all such a poetic way. A definite 10 Best Steve
that is such a nice and thoughtful piece. thanks for sharing.
The lesson is truth well noted AlfThanks for love of fellow man regards
WHEN YOU ENTER THIS DOMAIN, AND YOU WISH HERE TO REMAIN, I ASK YOU PLEASE THEN TO REFRAIN FROM USING MY LORD'S NAME IN VAIN..so much said inso shortand that too worth for whole life... beauftiful and reflects the presence of noble thoughts..i likeditandadmire it....10 read mine inch by aninch..not easy..beautiful world