2 Differnet Paths Comments

well wrote you do a GOOD JOB OF GETTTING A MESSAGE ACROSS

what i like in your poetry is questuins like here too..lovely and awesome..10/10

thats what they say let the past go and let one in

Good meaningful one.. it's great! !

i like it but some times u need to end a sentence hard dont give too much detail let the reader explore and feel what you are feeling. i some what modified it but idk just something This isn't the life you wanted It feels like we took two different paths In which you took the wrong one You feel you should let me go But at the same time I don’t I’m flying up high when wings you don’t have And you no longer fly You are trapped in a dark black hole where I cannot set you free It is not my fault but I wish it was You took this path that has set us apart. The only thing you ask from me now is to live my life without you For it will never be the same...

this poem is good.. sometimes one need to move out for one to move in.

That makes a lot of sense. I really like this poem. It's so sad when two people grow apart.