Tuesday, September 16, 2008

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Rating: 3.0

And I've been thinking
While I'm lusting
About a sun dream
And new play things
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David DeSantis
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Ivan Donn Carswell 01 October 2008

there is an echoed 'ring' reverberating throughout this one - an acoustic poem with subliminal message! Rgds, Ivan

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Tsira Goge 26 September 2008

But until then I’ll stay hitting it’s an old game On which I’m betting. .................................. well... Remarkable work... 10... Tsira

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Anita Atina 25 September 2008

Aha delightful is this poem, as delightful as the game that's being played

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Cheeky with some other ingredients thrown in with good measure. Great pace and flow here D. t x

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David DeSantis

David DeSantis

Utica, NY
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