And I've been thinking
While I'm lusting
About a sun dream
And new play things
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But until then I’ll stay hitting it’s an old game On which I’m betting. .................................. well... Remarkable work... 10... Tsira
Aha delightful is this poem, as delightful as the game that's being played
Cheeky with some other ingredients thrown in with good measure. Great pace and flow here D. t x
there is an echoed 'ring' reverberating throughout this one - an acoustic poem with subliminal message! Rgds, Ivan