1st Through The 12th..... [ Be Surprised ] Comments

This stream of consciousness works really well. It also represents an ever-evolving poem that can be stretched whenever the impulse stirs...Don't edit a word! Just keep adding....and adding....Great verse, Bri.

Bri, this is a wonderful write! Keep enthralling the readers' community!

Without doubt and even without reading full I can offer ICE CREAMS with 5 Stars.

Though this poem is too lengthy for me to read at once. I will read the remaining part later....

We come into existence with five senses but I'm unsure of the origin of the additional ones you seem to possess, such as..Common/ Unusual, solely for the sake of humor.

Brian, It's a great method to engage one's thoughts, we all need to do it frequently. I'm pleased to hear that you wed a Japanese figurine(Sweet Doll) . I recall owning a conversing Japanese Doll. Fun to have but for you...........I DOUBT.

I just 'ordered' an EDIT to this poem, to add to my current 2 'topics', zombies and lies [ which ARE lies! ]. Maybe the others,35 [thirty-five] MORE will appear soon? : ) bri

(cont.) I had chosen SO MANY topics that I guessed it might slow down PH's 'process', so I only entered, as topics 'zombies' and 'lies'. The only lie first processed IS the topic called 'lies'. : ) SURPRISE! ! !

(CONT.) 2 - Regarding what my 'Topics' are: I got frustrated trying to get my poem 'published' here for YOU to see. Therefore I reserved the MANY topics I'd chosen, until the poem was already on PH; (cont.)

Two important things, as the poet of this, I now 'must' say.1- There IS (at least) one word I left out, in error. HINT: It's missing from the '11th Hour'-stanza. (continued)

ATTENTION, ATTENTION, READERS: Finally this poem has showed up! But why, oh why am I complaining? I'm NOT complaining; that is JUST what you thought! !