Thursday, December 18, 2008

1st Day And 1st Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

The 1st day of love and the 1st time of a kiss that it brings,
The 1st day of love and the 1st time of romance that it takes,
The 1st day of love and the 1st time of sex moves like war!
But with all the walls around you to smell your roses:
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Edward Kofi Louis
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Gillena Cox 03 September 2009

i like the repetition, its very effective

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Naidz Ladia 23 December 2008

WHATTA A POEM...its very nice....its really nice...i like ths poem...i think i will like all ur poem...first may not be the last but the frst time i read ur poem leads me to read up to the last that u cud make...ur poem is good..

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Raymond Anyanwu 20 December 2008

beautiful, enlightening and soothing sir. i cannot conceal my delight with this

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