Monday, September 21, 2020

1hour Before Death Comments

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I feed you medicine, I feed you water
You made me feel that you are better.

Till that time I was not aware of the inevitable death,
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Ruma Zaman
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Alison Mujati 22 September 2020

Good poem, good start, may you please my poem Angels and tell me what you think

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Abu Afzal Saleh 21 September 2020

congratulatinon. very nice poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 September 2020

You start your eternal journey closing your eyes; Convert your all agony into feather white rays.....oh! it's pathetic....a while ago is the living agent and now dead....just time fact...expiration moment traveling everywhere! ! !

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Chinedu Dike 21 September 2020

A poignant bit of verse nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm...

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